Essay Revisions Sheet

By now, you should be expecting your graded Essay 1 to come back to you. You might not like your grade. That's fine. What you've got to do now, simply enough, is to revise your essay.

Here's a link to the worksheet I'd like you to use when revising your essay:

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B59oU02C12STcmtKRDBBeEk1cUE/edit.

(Note: This worksheet is all about spotting and correcting minor errors, editing errors. Your larger, more dramatic revisions should be obvious from your essay's next draft.)